Tierra's Fifth Blog

Adgenda
-Blog

-writing persuasive essays: body paragraphs

Homework:

RJ 13.2 15-20 pages

Hi Tierra here doing the blog. First Jules read his blog then chose a new blogger for the day and chose ME. i guess i was moving to slow so Ms. Nakada told me to go hurry up and do the blog. :) Right now the nerdz are doing there persuasive essays on water bottled vs tap water. the nerdz need to put ICE in their essays. Here is an example that Ms. Nakada gave:

First name Last name

Emerson Middle School

1650 Selby Avenue

Los Angeles, CA 90024

May 12, 2014

Dear LAUSD School board:

I am a student from Emerson Middle School on the west side of Los Angeles, writing about how we can ensure student access to clean drinking water. 

( you get what I'm saying right?)

I was listening to what Ms. Nakada was saying and then i got distracted by Brianna's sneeze ( the facial expressions she makes make me lol ) anyways, I have got to go write my essay because, I don't want to do it for homework. (Emerson's Cheer Squad is going to cheer at a basketball game but i forgot who we are playing against around 3:00 @Webster middle school) Flower just walked in late with Coffee Bean in her hands. Now she went to the office to get a pass. In the Persuasive Essays you need to have:

1) 5 body paragraphs

 -Introduction

-Argument #1

-Argument #2

-Counterargument

(I'm not sure if this is right)

-Conclusion

 Okay. I'm serious. I am really about to write my essay...

Okay. I'm back the bell is about to ring so bye 

Question: what side are taking on the bottled vs. tap water argument and why? (even though nobody comments anymore) :(